Comments Poem by Matloob Bokhari

Rachuwm Okorie Antoine i'm honoured to have met you. you're indeed a versed bard. Your poetry is awesome..... I'm moved by your dexterity and Choice of words! !

Alby Raymond Parackal Divine thoughts flow, Divinely in words to follow!

Das Krishna: I am happy you know the truth which never was, is or will be changed. Reality which changes is not a reality your writing is your doubt on truth which is beginning to arouse interest and curiosity and you will strangely find it is a truth.The reality is so capable to hide truth, that one has to believe it without seeing. Nobody can learn truth; truth is self evident. You cannot learn crying by looking at a photograph but you cry on your own. Anything learnt is not knowledge.
Kumarmani Mahakul: On behalf of all fellow poets in PoemHunter, we offer a title of honour to poet Matloob Bukhari, as, 'Melodic Intuition.' This title is offered due to his high-standard literary perseverance in poetry and literature. From today onward he will be known as 'Melodic Intuition Matloob Bukhari. We hope all poets, visitors and people will like this.
Marilyn Ann Francis: Matloob…. Your poetry is the candle. Your words are the light to show the world of their horrible plight…. God Bless you…. Excellent. MAF
Tisha Emberton: You are a genius with imagery! I love how the poem begins with the faced of this beautiful imagery of a kingdom, then also as it unfoldthe truth of what the villagers must face at the rule of king. This poem is brilliant! It is the best poem I've read in a while. You, my friend, are an amazing poet! Your mind is beautiful! I had to read this twice because the words captivated me. We done! ! ! This is my favorite poem by you. 😊
Jann Gail Jones: Oh, how beautiful you write dear Matloob! I do believe this is one of my all time favorites! Yes, let's dance, sing, love, and live hugging!
Nyla Alisia: Matloob Your poem is beyond beautiful! There is no more beautiful compliment than that! I am honored ~
Janey Baskin: Matloob, you are one fine poet. You remind me of Rumi, who is my favorite poet in the world. Keep writing!
Kristen Scott: Matloob ~ Thanks. I love your work, your poetry Is always above the bar of excellence, Thank You, K
Jann Gail Jones: Dear Matloob, there words were so precious to me this morning. They brought such beautiful images to mind and softness and beauty to my heart that tears welled in my eyes. Thank you for having such a beautiful heart to be able to write such beautiful things. I thank God for people like you. You keep me going and happy and give me faith in humanity. Blessing to your dearest friend!
Marietta Mardirossian: I always read your poems, your words are always heart touching, I admire how your ink flows so beautifully. I liked your page too, YOU ARE SHINING AS THE SUN. I LOVE THE WAY YOU PUT UR WORDS JUST IN THE RIGHT PLACES. You seem to be god to create world out of love.
Deepak Choudhary: Simply outstanding…! Your poem is a combination ofthe mystical Blake, the imagist Pound, and the symbolically poignant Baudelaire… dear Sir Matloob.
Farzana Altaf: You have created an interesting poetry. Unique is the word I could use to describe your writing… You are an accomplished writer with a good grasp of English. Believe me, it is a pleasure to read the work of gifted writer like you.
Vern Ford: Matloob. I can almost hear Buffy Saint Marie singing your absolutely breathtaking poems!
Laura Oliva Palacio: Magnifique voila! ! ! ! What a beautiful poetry! With simple words, but of great significance make one clearly perceived the sweet and sensitive young hearts have inspiration in the bright universe of love and the infinite. Matloob! ! !
Jenda Lovely Lady: Poet Matloob. You are the essence of Rumi, my favorite. Lovey Lady~
Tod McNeal: Matloob. Beautiful sentiments and beautiful words from an obviously beautiful heart.
Farzana Altaf: Reading you is a pleasure and education I'm a huge fan of your writing. Matloob you are a poetic genius... Well done.
Scott Goodell: I am glad--you are channelizing your true potential through such a nice medium of self expression. Your work is amazing! I am mesmerized by your poetry and always feel pleasure in strolling in your beautiful world of imagination! ! !
Michele Vizzotti-White: You are one of the best poets of our time no doubt rich imagery in just a few lines..
Karyn Walker: Love the deep depths in this ink, dear Matloob Your words are eternal. Free flowing ink, straight from your precious heart…Angel.
FazeelaMollick: After I read Matloob's words my heart began to pound. I felt every word to the core.
Sajid Habib: Another message of divine love.... Well written Matloob. Rumi relates his long time intimate friend cum inspiration Shams tabrezi as a spokesperson of Creator's love for his creation... You keep the message going.
Deepak Choudhary: An amazing poetic odyssey which records the poet's tireless quest for the invincible and everlasting spirit of freedom. What is truly remarkable about this poem is the fact that despite its profound mystical hue, it has a chiseled earthy diction, palpable symbolic underpinnings, imaginative excellence adapted so closely to our empathetic understanding of it(contrary to the eerie flights of fancy without even nuanced subtleties in an intelligible quantum) , neat execution and balanced rather than unbridled or impetuous overflow of thoughts which a great many masters of narrative and mystical poetry (I have read) are tempted to ride on at times. In all, the poem matches some of the best pieces written by the Early Romantics, G M Hopkins, and probably Dylan Thomas. I'm truly fascinated by this grand, sublime, and ecstatic celebration of freedom…. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, dear sir

Karyn Walker: This seems like something out of a vivid dream, so surreal it is! Your words will be read forever Matloob. With today`s technology they cannot be lost. I read this poem three times my brother, three times and then I took a walk down memory lane, bingo it hit me! I said to myself: God`s been talking to him! In fact, I believe in all the best works God holds the pen....writing cannot be ad- libbed, not the best works anyway! you! Never take my words for useless flattery. I promise I see something about you very special and that can never be taken from you dear one. You are devoted to Allah, you are a man after His heart for you love Him with all your being and in return He gives you this gift. I am only a vessel Matloob, He is taking you somewhere and I trust you will love where you are going. Best of the best for you always!
 
Sandra Delussu: You give me gump boose...boose gumps! Deep, deep, deep your love do find lyrics as arrows to this poor little heart of mine hungry to be filled like this! thank you my favourite poet.
Roger Pullin.: I vote Matloob for world president...
Angela Davis: This is just brilliant Matloob! your words are always incredible and touching and they resonate with me. your work is so amazing,
Maurin Alessandro: You have a gift of the words....Im glad to have a friend so smart and with a lot of poems like this...You're amazing my dear friend...You have a magic pen in your hands...And good ideas in your head...Congratulations. I'm your fan.
Margaret Gudkov: You made me sway in beauty of your poem. Matloob...I think this the best I've ever read by you. This is very good.

Elena Popescu I sense the deep mysticism of your vision so full of love. Thank you for sharing it, the world needs the your lessons of light.

K.R. Morrison: O word enchanter! Your love shines in your poem like diamonds and your poem is the sun's reflection that kisses the moon.
Farah Naz Fatima Rizvi What a spellbinding narration of Karbala. Torches heart and soul with the spirit of Imam Hussain's A.S preparedness to sacrifice his everything on the righteous path. JazakAllah for the share.
 

آہا، مجھے ان حسین پھولوں کے خوشبو بھرے
جھونکنے مدہوش لگے الفاظ کا حسن کھو گیا، پھولوں کی مٹھاس مسکرانے لگی، شہد کی مٹھاس روح میں اتر گئی۔ فیصلہ نہ ہو سکا کہ الفاظ شریں تھے کہ شہد، پولوں کی خوشبو مدھر تھی یا تشبہیہات و استعارات کی مہک۔۔۔ ؟
Professor Anwer Jalal



بلاشبہ آپ کی شاعری کا ماخذ قدرت جیسا عظیم و لافانی ذخیرہ ہے
Saeed Sadho















DEDICATED TO MY MOTHER
Whose prayer in the Night of Power
Blessed me with a poet's pen
To paint rainbow in the clouds of fear
And blossom flowers in the flames of fire