Tuesday, July 10, 2007

Confusion Comments

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I would watch you pass through the hall
And be like ole' what have I missed
Its been so long since I've kissed
I want to love her
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Dane Dino
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Coreena Dejesus 16 July 2007

I can feel your confusion in this poem, great show of emotion! Hugz~ CC

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Anabel just Anabel 10 July 2007

nice. my friend you are passing through the same situation as I am. it's so hard and painful to see the person you love with someone else and even thou you feel happy for the person for they have found love, yourself feel miserable at knowing is not you who is there with her/him. nice poem! ! !

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