Nishi Kumari


Connection - Poem by Nishi Kumari

You stay a miles away but I feel you are so near
Like those of the twinkling stars wishing good night
in my ears
You walk down the stairs in a secret silence
But I listen to your breathes beaming with your presence
You play the guitar standing at the roadside so far
But its music drowns me in its hypnotizing beauty
so close yet so apart
Your tears when they drip down through the ripples
of your eyes
They travel the distance of my cheeks like the big
shinning pearls so bright
You borrow some smiles from those sunflowers
in the daylight
They fall on my lips every morning like the fresh
dew drops on the leaves
You stay a miles away and I don't know the way
to reach you there
But your love ties me to you like the beats of my
heart
Its a connection....a beautiful connection...

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Connection by Nishi Kumari

  • Rahman Henry (10/15/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    Distance never matters. Well penned feelings. Lovely poem. (Report) Reply

    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (6/12/2016 3:16:00 PM)

    Yes I agree with you completely.... thanks for reading

    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (11/22/2015 9:47:00 AM)

    thank you so much :)

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/4/2015 4:58:00 PM)


    You borrow some smiles from those sunflowers
    in the daylight
    They fall on my lips every morning like the fresh
    dew drops on the leaves- - beautiful expressions of love. let it come through. let your wishes be fulfilled.. that is my p rayer for you.
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    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (9/5/2015 12:26:00 AM)

    thanks a lot...

  • (6/8/2015 10:46:00 AM)


    True, love knows no boundary, no barrier...10/10. (Report) Reply

    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (6/21/2015 2:23:00 AM)

    Well that means something...getting 10/10...thank you...

  • Saadat Tahir (4/19/2015 10:20:00 AM)


    nice feely and heartfelt lines
    an expression of ones heart beat!

    liked
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    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (6/21/2015 2:24:00 AM)

    thank you Saadat...hope you liked it...

  • Kim Barney (4/5/2015 5:57:00 AM)


    Very nice. I enjoyed reading this. I especially liked
    TWINKLING STARS WISHING GOOD NIGHT IN MY EARS as if you could actually hear the stars. I have a similar line in my poem DO SOMETHING DIFFERENT.
    (Report) Reply

    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (6/21/2015 2:22:00 AM)

    thank you kim for your comments...god bless you...

    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (6/21/2015 2:21:00 AM)

    thanks Kim for your appreciation

  • Muhammad Farhan Ahmed (3/14/2015 2:08:00 PM)


    This is such a heartfelt write with excellent, vivid imagery! The metaphors and similes are the main embellishment of this write. You are true. Love is the same everywhere. And distances grow the bond of love even more. This is an outstanding piece, but I just noticed a slight spelling mistake. It is 'shining' not 'shinning', a single 'n' comes. (Report) Reply

    Nishi Kumari Nishi Kumari (3/15/2015 8:50:00 AM)

    thanks Farhan for your appreciation and correction too...

  • Muhammad Farhan Ahmed (3/14/2015 2:07:00 PM)


    This is such a heartfelt write with excellent, vivid imagery! The metaphors and similes are the main embellishment of this write. You are true. Love is the same everywhere. And distances grow the bond of love even more. This is an outstanding piece, but I just noticed a slight spelling mistake. It is 'shining' not 'shinning', a single 'n' comes. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 11, 2015



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