Conscience Poem by SALINI NAIR


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Eternal part vibrates inside
Universal and potent always
Alienated way glimpse in shadows
Abundant rays reflects inwards
Art is boundless and concealed
Shine is profound and not evident

Universal form is active inside
Dictator of a revival part
Thoughts reflects in extreme silence
Truth and justice bargain itself
Visionary of life and its tract
Strip is fair in this life's art

Dumb spouse rests in a corner
A slave who is silent and grieving
Strive to cherish in a drama plotted
Mistakes that loop life thread
Mortal part grieves on notions
Failed part that relish in dreams

Mystery leads to mistakes always
Inside mighty revives old chart
Desire marches beyond the borders
Criticize and curse to balance the armature
Fail sink and withdraws to the supreme
Universal track of a life inside! ! ! ! !

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Wednesday, December 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mistake
Salini Nair 10 December 2014

in every body there resides a soul that is eternal and part of supreme soul.when mistakes increases it strives to correct it..when it fails it reflect as ruin.conscience part is always argueing inside ..later death happens to be a part of supreme soul....

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Chinedu Dike 19 January 2015

A well articulated train of thoughts, nicely encapsulated and beautifully penned in poetic diction to capture the conviction of poet. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 December 2014

Very profound and insightful penned with wonderful concept......amazing write

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Akhtar Jawad 12 December 2014

Man is a compound of positive and negative forces, struggle of the two forces is always on. I believe positive force is a gift of God and the negative force is what we call it a Satan. Death separates the two forces. Parveen Shakir said: - Woh to khushboo hay hawaon mein bikhar jaye ga, Masala phool ka hay phool kidhar jaye ga. (He is fragrance and will scatter in the atmosphere, where the flower will go is a mystery.) Whether fragrance will come back again as a new flower or its fate will be Nirvana, or the decision will remain pending till the final day of judgment. Various beliefs give various replies. who knows as the dead man was never heard after his death. A nice philosophic poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2014

Influence leads to mistakes always if these are wrong by others. Very nicely realized. But conscience when awakes realizes the truth. Wonderful poem.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 December 2014

In fact I think there is supreme philosophical thought is behind the ideas of the poem. The soul which always a witness to the actions of the human being but not directly eats the fruits of the actions gives timely counsels to restraint the wrong deeds but the other side of human thought continues his sins. The poem have wonderful thoughtful message for the correctness of worldly life with self awareness and intutive power. And also bound to listen the guidance of the soul.

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