Control Freak Poem by Scotty Ceurvels

Control Freak

Rating: 4.5


She yells and screams
With anger in her heart
She keeps it mean
While tearing you apart

Hurtful words with negative tones
Exploding emotions turned inside out
With Sticks and stones
And echoing shouts

She will keep you down 
Right where she needs
Sadness and frowns
And controlling deeds

Saturday, May 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,sad,anger,depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some time ago I experienced the anger of a love who told me 'your depression is killing me' and 'I can't take your emotional shut downs anymore'. Feeling like I was the 'problem' in our relationship, I left her and became homeless and an alcoholic. Years later I sobered up and got the help I needed and it is to her I dedicate this simple but strong reminder of who she is. Thanks Jo! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very powerful piece! I loved it and had to read it twice :)

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Scotty Ceurvels 01 June 2015

Thanks Margarita! ! ! Glad you liked it.

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Chinedu Dike 31 May 2015

An insightfully piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and subtly penned with conviction. Indeed, a control freak destabilizes ones emotional, spiritual, social... wellbeing. An ugly person to be with. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ?9

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Scotty Ceurvels 31 May 2015

Thank you for the kind words. It's easy to write when you lived it. Lol

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Ayman Parray 30 May 2015

A very well written piece, Scotty. Thanks for sharing. If you have the time please review my 'Valhalla', it is about worthy warriors like you.

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Scotty Ceurvels 31 May 2015

I appreciate the kind words Ayman. Keeps me wanting to write more.

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Kelly Kurt 30 May 2015

A powerful story, Scotty. Thanks for sharing. I wish you well

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Scotty Ceurvels 31 May 2015

Thank you Kelly! Much appreciated! ! !

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Scotty Ceurvels

Scotty Ceurvels

Boston, MA
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