Corrected Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar
Corrected
Rating: ★3.0
If I said I love you!
You would not think I meant it!
And I would not object,
You wanting to correct me!
If you thought it best...
You needed to be closer,
So I can be corrected!
Wednesday, September 13, 2006
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8/28/2026 1:02:40 AM # rel_20260827T145718Z_a0f1bd3
Hi Lawrence, Not sure what this all about but if someone wants to correct you tell them your a grown man and you have your own opinion, in a nice way of course. (ha ha) Take care. Excellent poem.