I can feel enslavements serpentine coils wrap around me,
Leaving me with a breath weaker than the other.
With dripping fangs that ranged skywards,
They inflicted their venom into my celestial refuge,
Paralyzing my gods and reaping me of faith,
Despair being my heaven I sink to shame.
With yellow eyes and a hiss blaring from my mouth,
I surrender as defeat takes it's place in my heart...
Defenitley a twisted poem. I love it. It really resembles mine. I was really deeply infuriated when i wrote it. You have a great poem here.
wow, i loved it! it was nice, sweet and dark exactly what i love in poetry! your a GREAT poet Vampire keep writing! ! ~Love Hazel G.E
I love the metaphor and the feelings/visions that this poem evokes. Well written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderfully written. I like the strong words you use there, a lot of suffering brought into this poem. Lovely work: -)