Couldn'T Save Me Poem by Spiritwind Wood

Couldn'T Save Me

Rating: 5.0


You couldn't hold on
so I had to let you go
it just got so damn hard to fight
how I started to feel
and the pain started to show
where nothing here with you was real
and I couldn't make it through
another night

My tears for you froze
that no longer fall anymore
as my heart turned to stone
you were always here close
but I always felt so alone
you couldn't save me and now I'm gone
leaving what I couldn't take nomore
Spiritwind-2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 29 December 2015

........beautifully expressed...sometimes reality bites, dear friend ★ - where nothing here with you was real - - you were always here close but I always felt so alone -

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Darkness J 08 April 2012

Bravo! ! So touching this piece! Thank you for sharing it..

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