I'M Free Poem by Spiritwind Wood

I'M Free

Rating: 5.0


Don't grieve for me
for now I am free
I'm following the path
God has laid for me
I took his hand
when I heard him call
I turned my back
and left it all

I could not stay
yet another day
to laugh, to love
to work or play
tasks left undone
must stay that way
I found that place
at the close of day

If my parting has left a void
then fill it with remembered joy
a friendship shared
a laugh, a kiss
ah yes, these things
I too will miss

Be not burdened
with times filled with sorrow
my life's been full
I savored so much
good times, good friends
a loved one's touch

Perhaps my time
seemed but all too brief
don't lengthened it now
with undo grief
lift up your heart
and share with me
know that we are never apart
God wanted me now
he set me free
(spiritwind-2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A beautiful spiritual poem Bob, one I would say could be well received at a funeral and I assume this is why the person as been set free. It has great rhythm and rhyme and purpose and it is great to meet you! 10 love Karin

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 01 October 2009

Welcome to poem hunter, and thanks for sharing. This is a heart warming elegy poem. a 10+++

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Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009

Thanks for inviting me to read your poem Bob...This one as Karin says has a deep spiritual tone and is very appropriately to be set to music and sung at a funeral...Welcome to PH and good luck 10+++

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Sandra Crosas 01 December 2018

This poem was my selection for the Memorial of my father at his funeral. Just perfect! Thank you.

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Mar4y Starr 18 September 2018

The words are perfect for this occasion that has happened here and now. Thank you Spirit Wind

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 21 October 2015

Verily, a heart touching poem......10

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* Sunprincess * 28 July 2015

.....superb write....flows beautifully ★

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Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009

Thanks for inviting me to read your poem Bob...This one as Karin says has a deep spiritual tone and is very appropriately to be set to music and sung at a funeral...Welcome to PH and good luck 10+++

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