Counting Losses Poem by Barry Middleton

Counting Losses



the year will pass away
a soldier lost in war
a sailor sets to sea
returning nevermore

the hard despair of life
torments the soul of man
so poets often ask
what is deception's plan

nearby a silent star
observes in hushed repose
and what it all may mean
nobody really knows

another child is born
its tears will curse the light
an old man grieves the sun
that passes into night

Counting Losses
Friday, April 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 09 April 2016

The last stanza painting the different aspects of what is good or bad to us is a great perception, Barry.

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Barry Middleton 09 April 2016

I was thinking no wonder babies cry when they are born.

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