Couple Poem by Glen Kappy

Couple

Rating: 4.5


from 'While Passing Through'/Summer

Quiet dawn.
In silhouette on a wire
a mourning dove couple—
it looks like one
gently grooms the other.

Friday, July 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,care,caring,couple,dawn ,sunrise
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 28 November 2017

It is such a beautiful sight! .....birds tending and caring each other! I had two finches, a male and female staying together in a cage, pruning each other's feathers in turn! They slept together huddling close. With so much delight, I used to watch them! A beautiful Tanka!

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Glen Kappy 28 November 2017

Hi, Valsa! And thank you. On top of everything else we get from nature are these models of tenderness, of relating to one another. -Glen

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Daniel Brick 17 July 2017

We have both learned key lessons from bird couples this summer, me with my finches perching on the balcony railing, you with these doves showing a natural tenderness, all the mire convincing because it's spontaneous. Thus is a perfectly balanced tanka.

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Glen Kappy 17 July 2017

hey, daniel! thank you for reading and commenting. i do learn much from creatures. i think of walt's i think i could turn and live with the animals. may we (in the largest sense of we, in the lord's prayer sense of we) keep learning. glen

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Ravi A 07 July 2017

Very fine feelings inscribed in verses.

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Glen Kappy 08 July 2017

Thank you, Ravi. We can learn some things from these birds, yes? The best to you! -Glen

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