Crab Nebula Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Crab Nebula

Rating: 4.9

Today is the day
When you came into being
For earthly sight seeing
From motherly heaven
To this terrestrial
Vertigo of seven
You travelled 5000 light years
Muizza, my dear of all dears
In this constellation of stars
You are the one all at pars!

(Dedicated to my niece Muizza Abbas on her 24th. Birthday on 14th. May,2009)

Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

beautiful poem written.............Happy birthday to her too.

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Sandra Fowler 14 May 2009

What a graceful, luminous gift you have given to your niece on her birthday. I am sure she will cherish it. Time will have us all, but words are imperishable. A bouquet of good wishes to both of you. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Shashendra Amalshan 14 May 2009

Wat a gift for your niece...send my reagards...happy birthday 'Muizza'...wish all of your expectations will come true

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Isaac Maliya 15 May 2009

Happy birthday Muizza! This poem is a shrine for this great day and those that are to come!

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Alison Cassidy 17 May 2009

A fascinating description of a date in time and the birthday of one who is near and dear. From Australia, may I take this opportunity to wish Muizza the happiest of birthdays. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 31 May 2009

What a birthday gift, a dedication of Love and pride, and already placed tenderly into her treasure chest I am sure - a legacy you have already left to the world Naseer - this is left in her heart for all time Peace to you all

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Naidz Ladia 24 May 2009

belated happy birthday to your niece..nebula, a star...stars that brighten the night as inspiration to lonely sky..this piece is a nice gift to your loving niece..naizz

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Another excellent work, love with 10.

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Duh Huh 22 May 2009

You immortalized the love you feel for your niece in this beautiful poem. Am sure she was impressed, honored and greatful as this is such a wonderful gift. Thank you very much for sharing. :)

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Saadat Tahir 22 May 2009

hi naseer wrote a celestial ode...took a light speed tour of the universe and found a mean task there great penning cheers...its a tenner

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