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I have walked empty halls
Dragging my sore feet
I've spoken to blank walls
With no one to greet.
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A good resolve at the end. Expressions come flowing. Nice
A beautiful poem. The last stanza speaks about your determination to get out of the impediments and forge ahead. Five stars for the poem.
A driving speech, only I slipped a bit on the 'minnow'! I like the rhyming. WELCOME to PH, 'new poet'.
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2/26/2026 5:23:26 PM # 1.0.0
My body begins to ache My lips garble sounds I am asleep but awake Not yet out of bounds.....liked the poetic expression. A beautiful poem!