Creature Poem by Tom Allport

Creature

Rating: 4.6


Innocent creature
Desperate to cry
Feathered friend lying there
Eyes, opened to the sky
Beak, struggling to open
Just... waiting to die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Garry Rowlands 04 April 2017

Very dsrk ending to a poem about hopes and dreams? Very good.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 20 November 2016

The poet's feeling expressed on the dying pangs of a petty creature is remarkable 10

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