Creek Of Death! Comments

Beautiful poem Salini. Beautiful way you have portrayed death in different ways. Interesting lines.... Death a necessity always Bid that plotted elsewhere Pursuance a matter of time There leave some empty drops silent! ! ! Loved it.

the portrait of death nicely framed....good work

A voyage that is unethical But pursue the moral self plotted Gang that brutal and hectic Like a cyclone hit lives A thoughtful poem.

wonderful script with beautiful lines- Long years that lost countless Faded charm that is hostile Withdrawal a vacant heed Stay for its mercy momentum nice one

A sheet exhibiting ways of death so beautifully scripted with wonderful lines......I like it