Crippled Inside Poem by David Darbyshire

Crippled Inside

Rating: 5.0


Have a lot to hide,
feel crippled inside
you should let it all out
but some people just don't know,
how to.

Well let me tell you,
how to let it all out.
Go into the woods,
take an axe, chop a tree
and scream and shout.

Having released all that stress.
Take some of that wood home,
make a nice warm fire.
Relax, chill
be pampered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 03 August 2006

An interesting write, well-felled Love duncan X

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Nalini Hebbar 01 August 2006

very sweet dave...its easier to vent steam on the family...they are kind of eternal...tree, well, i know many are chopped but being an ecologist...i would try something else! ...love...nalini

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