Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Critical Mass - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

No confession?
Mental anguish you will possess.
No lessons learned?
The worse for you,
It is going to get.

No relief from your beliefs,
Is going to release you to forget!
A critical mass is upon you now...
Results of it will test.

Your point of view has been subjective.
To feed a greed and hoard.
Your motivation inspired one objective.
And with deceit...
Your own defeat,
Comes with an approval to complete!
And you are the main one...
That will not be ignored.

No confession?
Mental anguish you will possess.
No lessons learned?
The worse for you,
It is going to get.

The pain of it brings much regret!
And you are not alone!
That you can bet!
A collection of waste...
You tasted with acceptance.
And now may bitter your tongue.
But your bitterness inflicted,
Was not welcomed by anyone!

This delivery is just for you...
Without a need for your circumspect.

Disfavor?
Or denials applied,
To attempt rejection!
That which comes leaves nothing left.
All of it...is yours.
All of it,
At your doorstep!

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008



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