Crush Poem by Anabel Anguiano

Crush

Rating: 4.8


I can see thee
dancing with roses
unaware of me
hugging my loneliness

I can see thee
flying up high
in my hollow dream
in this silent night

and sometimes I think
I'm in your eyes
feeling I can swim
all the way into your heart

We are walking on blue waters
feeling the breeze of the sea
for I'm with you nothing matters
for we are together, I breath

holding hand to hand
we walk to the moon
into a dreamland
on a hot balloon

but the dream is over
and there you are
dancing with roses
feeling like a czar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Luce 25 February 2007

heya, great poem! thanx for posting a comment on mine.

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Maddy 05 April 2019

I love these

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beautifully sad, the poem takes you up and down...

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Gold Flower 06 June 2007

Very touching! Very, very touching! Your poems are amazing! Alright, Anabel! Lilly

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David Corman 02 April 2007

wow, its really striking

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Lin B 01 March 2007

WOW! This is wonderful dear! I love the way it flows. Great word usage! ~Linley~

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