Internal Fight Poem by Anabel Anguiano

Internal Fight



and there it was
with its pale light
staring sadly
at the black night

and there I was
crying alone in his arms
not wanting him to see me cry
and feeling protected in his arms
but then he left and I was again
alone and lost...in my internal fight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gold Flower 06 June 2007

It shows my sadness for him everyday when he left me, getting ready for summer! These are my true feelings! Lilly

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David Corman 26 March 2007

It shows true sadness that people go through.

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Lin B 05 February 2007

I like it. Being alone, and losing someone is something everyone has to go through. Maybe next time he'll stay :) ~Linley~

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Dean Simpson 05 February 2007

You left a comeent on one of my poems so i thought id return the favour. Thats a great poem. The internal fights are the hardest fights. But when you win them, you feel a sense of achievement...

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