Cry For You Poem by Lenore Lee

Cry For You

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes are glistening with unshed tears
I've watched you grow through all these years
I can't comfort you, I don't know how
Though I wish to stop your pain right now
You're tears are refused their right to shed
Your thoughts are locked inside your head

You are imprisoning all of your emotions
I watch you just going through the motions
Water from my eyes begins to dropp
Because I can't make your pain stop
You won't show weakness, you'd prefer to be dead
So during your pain, your tears for you I'll shed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 24 October 2011

Wow, amazing rhyming scheme. You have a knack for it, rhyming is something I'm terrible at! Very emotional, I experienced something great here.

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Kasia Fedyk 03 June 2012

Lenore, you are so very talented and this poem represents your born talent, given by God for you to share with all of us. This poem is very beautiful and so very true. Yes, it is all inside always there, I can see it in you. Love and Light. Kasia

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Abdallah Gamal 12 May 2012

A very beautiful touching poem, through all what you wrote, I like this most, I love it.

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Caroline Keller 30 October 2011

It was indeed very insightful and very realistic... I can relate to this poem in such a personal way it's just unreal.... brilliant job! !

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Theany Ouy 27 October 2011

Very insightful, love it! Thank you for sharing..

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Crimson Love 26 October 2011

I love this poem, often someone needs the one whom can cry the tears they cannot. beautiful writing.

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