Crying Out Poem by Crystle Jones

Crying Out

Rating: 5.0


Im sick of all the lies.
Im sick of the tears you've made me cry.

You say 'lets forgive and forget'
But then im left with only regret.

I have this hole in my heart,
Cuz i know we should part.

But everytime i turn to leave,
I stay cuz i seem to believe,
My pain will make you wanna change.
But now i know its out of range.

So stop looking me in my eyes,
And telling me your stupid lies.

I will no longer believe,
cuz all you do, is decieve.
You seem to think i cant see threw you,
But i know you better, then you think i do.

The memories are too much to bare.
The love i thought we would share.

The butterflies.
The caring eyes.
The flirting smiles.
Beginning trials.

You made me look like such a fool,
For putting you on this pedestal.

All your lies and deciete,
You seem to have been...
My worst defeat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

A nice poem well compose good job.......

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Nooruddeen Mm 24 November 2009

Dear Crystal A real good poem filled with sincere words. No artificiality at all. Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

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Keith Hendrickson 24 November 2009

a great piece of writing. i can definitly tell its from the heart. the only thing is the last line you say ''my worst defeat'' you shouldnt ever give up or accept defeat. if you think something is worth fighting for than fight 4 it. but at the same time if your fighting for something that isnt willing to give that same passion back than that is a useless fight. peace an love, keith

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