My Dear Rose Poem by Crystle Jones

My Dear Rose

Rating: 3.8


When people ask me where you are,
I wish i could say more then just your far.

With every passing day,
I think about you, and what we had.
I wish your parents wernt so mad.

Every second, of every day,
I miss you more and more.
I cant believe you were with me, even though i was a bore.

You were my reason for living,
you are so sweet and giving.

I wish you were still here with me,
But its ok for one day together, again we will be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

Is that a red rose? may be, hence you penned fine words......... :) nice rhym/rhythm.......closing seset are/far more/bore excellent 10+

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The Dreamer 18 July 2009

soft and nice thank you

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Eyan Desir 23 June 2009

Good write to your rose I gave you 10 keep it up keep writing

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Angelic Warrior 21 June 2009

a sad story with a hint of a happy ending.....nice :) .......i tough for those who you love the most to be away for long :)

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Dislocated Heart 20 June 2009

very nicely written... 'Again we will be'....nice...

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