Curtain Call

Rating: 5.0

Early dawn's curtain,
Drawn to reveal rain showers,
And a pertinent absence of birdsong;
The hum of a motor engine;
The coolness of this morning,
Is quickly snatched away,
As the rain subsides;
Bird songs;
Kiskadee, kiskadee, kiskadee,
And sunlight floods the morning;
Curtain call.

(2010)

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 27 April 2010

so beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

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Eyan Desir 27 April 2010

Very rich Poetic write well done

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Dawn felt and birdsong harbingering Drawn be it rainy or not Nice diction 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mark Normand 10 August 2012

This is a very good poem that easily allows the reader to paint a picture in their mind of what you are trying to say.Wonderful.

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Karen Sinclair 08 July 2012

Hello i am a prolific reviewer and this is one of my favourites in a long while....truly. tyvm...karen

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Stephanie Fiddy 10 October 2010

Your verse is elegant and paints a beautiful image in my mind. It seems to have a melancholy undertone. Yet it is still a breathe of fresh air.

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Marieta Maglas 30 April 2010

Nice image created with words great poetic work..

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Afzal Shauq 28 April 2010

very sweet poem with rich idea and the expression is very impressive..loved it..well done dear friend and thanks for sharing..10/10

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