Early dawn's curtain,
Drawn to reveal rain showers,
And a pertinent absence of birdsong;
The hum of a motor engine;
The coolness of this morning,
Is quickly snatched away,
As the rain subsides;
Bird songs;
Kiskadee, kiskadee, kiskadee,
And sunlight floods the morning;
Curtain call.
(2010)
This is a very good poem that easily allows the reader to paint a picture in their mind of what you are trying to say.Wonderful.
Hello i am a prolific reviewer and this is one of my favourites in a long while....truly. tyvm...karen
Your verse is elegant and paints a beautiful image in my mind. It seems to have a melancholy undertone. Yet it is still a breathe of fresh air.
very sweet poem with rich idea and the expression is very impressive..loved it..well done dear friend and thanks for sharing..10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dawn felt and birdsong harbingering Drawn be it rainy or not Nice diction 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK