I could feel the vibration of your screams in the air.
'Twas in a curve of the time.
Your sight was in touch with this vibration.
I could understand this vibrating touch.
The curved time had a sense.
'Twas like a sigmoid curve.
The air was very much compressed to make a sound...
A twinkle in your eye was assailed
to reach the ground
while gliding rapidly along your very long, curved eyelash...
You would re-enter your world, deep inside you,
You would become the curve in itself
to make love become an unstable point of equilibrium...
A gray cloud formed when the air was heated by the sun.
A sphere of incumbency would engrave
your insular thinking, nor your thinking
would be able to keep the memory of
that second anymore. That second time
could glide between my fingers
for a prayer.
The horizon of the sea
was photoengraved with corals and shells...
The eye on the horizon received the wholeness for comprehensiveness....
This comprehensiveness could shiver the universe...
You would be awakened, and you would be able to be revived.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
This poem i feel, must be read along with your poem- 'Flight'...much connection i notice...the curve and the air are the poetic tools in this poem...rainbow and flight in the other... Apart from a curved eye brow, the caption curved eye-lash takes the poem to a mystic surreal level...the theme underlying i feel is the hopes in life...and the uncertainty of the latter...10
From: T. Q. Sims (New Orleans, LA United States; Male; 31) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/27/2009 5: 43: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) i also really liked 'curved eyelash.' the title mad me curious-really great poem too. ~t.q. sims
this poem depicts the real feeling of having our eyelash curved...a moment of awakening, a sign of happiness... brings joy to whom ever our eyes would set in. nice words, nice flow
A lovely poem transporting from sensuousness to super-consciousness. CP
From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 38: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: curved eyelash A divinity that holds curves of time.I love it. Randy
Hey Dear Poet lend me your poetic imagination…please please... Imagery has come live and alive…palpable and pulsatile… I can ‘listen’ the subsubtle quiver of Curved Eyelash... Exquisite read for me on 1 January 1,2010 and poetically I’m filled up and flying… Flying 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Added as my fav. poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love would become an unstable point of equilibrium... 10