A Ray Of Sun Poem by Marieta Maglas

A Ray Of Sun

Rating: 4.9

While drawing a circle,
A ray of sun that slips on your sad face
Is not only a ray, it is the light.
Moreover, my feelings
slipping into your soul
Until your heart
Begins to vibrate
Mean all,
Because they come from God.

Copyright © Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Friday, May 22, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: sunshine
Kesav Easwaran 25 November 2009

The ray of light and the feelings- both slipping into...the former into face the latter into soul...an allegorical beauty...well done Mari...10

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Roman Petrov 04 August 2009

Interesting stracture and meaning, beautiful poem!

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Afzal Shauq 05 August 2009

A ray of sun that slips on your sad face, By drawing a circle, Is not only a ray, it is light, But my feelings, That slip in your soul Until your heart Begins to vibrate, Means all. its a symbol of hope, for dreaming good and happy days.. I liked this poem and what i like in your poetry is your cut to cut ideas and meaningful thoughts..liked it very much..appreciate your talent..10/10

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 05 August 2009

What perfection, most impressive Marieta - coming back for more

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Annabel Sheila 14 August 2009

Very romantic, and soulful. Nicely crafted piece. A most enjoyable read. Anna

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Indira Renganathan 25 January 2010

Very meaningful...a gentle poetic way of expressing your love.....lovely10

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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 January 2010

Beautiful. poet portraits the feeling. unique piece of painting by words.

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Marieta Maglas 06 January 2010

From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: a ray of sun This is a very beautiful image, economy of words, well penned Randy

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Eric Roxas 03 January 2010

This short poem said everything it needed to convey. Perfect in style and in choice of words. Beautifully written. Very thoughtful writing! Eric

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Marieta, you just warmed my heart with this piece! ! It's beautiful!

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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