Cutting Poem by Victoria Tori

Cutting

Rating: 4.3


Everyday is a struggle
Each day harder then the last
A voice deep down inside taunting me
Telling me to relieve the pain, the stress
To do what I am prohibit
To cut myself
I try to ignore it
But it gets stronger and stronger
Its my worst fear yet
I gave in, I start to cut
Seconds later I’m in pain
I let myself down
I gave in to my fear
I let it take control of me
The voice deep down inside
Everyday is a struggle
Each day harder then the last

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
coca cola 26 September 2008

I give you a 10: ] I Loved loved loved it Your rigth when you say 'a voice deep down inside taunting me' Its truly powerfull... <3 Im glad your ex helped you, , , , Before it was to late

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

10 for this nice poem, beautiful.

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Subham Dutta 11 August 2008

Hi Victoria Emo Girl, It's a great poem.

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Javier Falcon 09 August 2008

Great that you had someone there for you, very deep in emotion... Awesome write...

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Steven Cable 25 May 2008

Great poem, very brave of you to share this.

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Coleman 18 September 2018

Honey your poem is a very powerful and heartfelt piece. Or it is to me I am pretty much life long cutter or so it appears as I have been doing it since prepubescence and I'll be sixty in a few months and have just gotten out of the hospital once more but I think my meds will work this time, how long remains to be seen but to anyone who cuts please be careful. Think about yourself. Care about yourself. I know it is hard sometimes.

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Craig Mize 27 April 2011

I like this poem you put your struggles and demons in words on paper. Maybe this poem can help out other people with this cutting problems.

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Tori Fleck 25 August 2009

I used to be a cutter! My first cut was on my right wrist with a razor blade. Not good! I stopped (so far) 4 months ago. And it STILL comes back to haunt me.

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TR0UBL3 IM B@Q 08 December 2008

i know what u go through i still cut well im quittin

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Jay Boyd 31 October 2008

thats a pretty good memorial.

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