john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 4,781 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Dad Is Sun, Mom Is Moon - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

the sun
is generous
as dad
in his love
we bask
so bright
and true
the moon
is selfless
as mom
pinning
day and night
to make sure
we shine
crowding
round her
like little stars


Comments about Dad Is Sun, Mom Is Moon by john tiong chunghoo

  • (5/9/2006 5:07:00 AM)


    Applause for your spare and elegant poem..

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (5/9/2006 4:17:00 AM)


    a near perfect poem...lovely indeed and a 10 from me! (Report) Reply

  • (5/9/2006 4:08:00 AM)


    I love the resounding simplicity of this poem John, really beautiful. Kind regards, Justine. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 9, 2006


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