Dance Of Garden Poem by Mantu Mahakul

Dance Of Garden

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Once planned to eat cashew nut one warden,
He thought of taking rest in shadow in garden.
Various thoughts came in to his mind more,
He could not control and did run near river shore.

He thought by watching river dancing flowing,
Before sunset in far West still sun is glowing.
Rising in mind he thought more furthermore,
How do learn the art of life from river and core?

Life is a mode and flow of stream he realized,
Then though about life birth, death is penalized.
He awaked and though more about creation,
At wonderful moment he did flow emotion.

Life is a dance in garden of God is wonderful,
It's difficult to know and understand his rule.
He though above and watched sand particles,
In bank of river he wrote further new articles.

He knew that dance was done here by illusion,
Many people fell down in adversely confusion.
Conclusion he drew not to run behind matter,
He did awake and walked in the true path better.

Friday, December 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Once in a garden one warden planned for eating cashew nut. Also he thought for taking rest in shadow in garden. Many more different thoughts came in to his mind. He could not control his unstable thoughts and did run near river shore. He thought again. By watching river is dancing and flowing, he dipped himself in thinking about life. In far west direction before sunset still sun is glowing he saw. He thought more and furthermore rising in mind. Really how river and core learn art of life? He realized that life is a mode and flow like a stream. Then he thought about life and though that death is surely penalized. There he awaked more and thought about creation. He flew emotion at wonderful moment. He further realized that really life is a dance in garden of God and it is wonderful. It is really difficult to know about and understand the rule of creation. He though above more and then watched sand particles in river bank. There he further rote new articles about life. He knew that here dance was done by illusion only. Due to this many people fell down in adversely confusion. He drew conclusion not to run behind matter. He did awake and then walked in true path in a better way." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2015

He knew that dance was done here by illusion, Many people fell down in adversely confusion. Conclusion he drew not to run behind matter, He did awake and walked in the true path better. A lovely thoughtful poem............................10

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 November 2015

He knew that dance was done here by illusion, Many people fell down in adversely confusion. Conclusion he drew not to run behind matter, He did awake and walked in the true path better. I love this last stanza. Life is an illusion. Material things do not matter. There is calm and serenity on the right path. Beautiful poem, Mantu...10

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Melvina Germain 01 November 2015

Delightful imagery painted within this poem, journeying through was beautiful and amazing. Thank you.....

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John Rickell 20 December 2014

I enjoyed reading this poem I like the way you have used the words

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John Rickell 08 December 2014

I enjoyed reading this poem. it has a character all its own.

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Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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