Danced With Daffodils Poem by Mary Forrester

Danced With Daffodils

Rating: 4.3


Sun drenched skies of yellow and blue
And my heart with pleasure fills
As I dance with the daffodils
In the meadows and woodlands I knew well
Dark green ivy entwine every tree
As it scrambles to the top most canopy
Heart shaped leaves from every tree
Touched by a gentle breeze
As the suns diamond glow
graces the woodland floor below

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 14 November 2013

Takes me back to my own strolling through the woods as a boy. Most of them now housing estates now. Nice poem Mary.

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Valerie Dohren 23 August 2013

You paint a beautiful scene, and the idea of dancing with the daffodils is quite lovely.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 September 2013

Nice imagery, well portrayed.

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Lorib 16 February 2018

I love it! I would leave out the word well, end it with knew because it rhymes with blue

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Leah Ayliffe 10 June 2014

Your word choice is perfection. I love how much landscape plays into your poems. Heart shaped leaves from every tree Touched by a gentle breeze As the suns diamond glow graces the woodland floor below Gorgeously done!

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Adeline Foster 25 May 2014

I too like this poem. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline

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Lenny Camacho 24 May 2014

I like daffodils and I like this poem

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Fiona Schwartzinoff 01 February 2014

The imagery is amazing. Very nostalgic and picturesque!

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