Amy Marie

Rookie - 489 Points (July 13,1992 / United States)

Dancing With Suicide - Poem by Amy Marie

You – Suicide himself –
Wrap silky hands around
My innocent hips of peach marble –
Seducing me with a million charms –
And flashy silver keys to your shiny night topless car.

Begin we to sway to music
Slow while man-made moons
Around us ring. Stand they out
As romantic lights among the
Secret Night Room.

Your loyal heart I feel on
My silky nightgown of grape purple –
And your black jacket
And pure pale collared
Shirt underneath.

My sweet perfume permeates
Us – and our senses – filling
Them with Silent Flowers.
No rules are there tonight –
Just you and me – Eccentric.

Dance we by my silky bed –
Its pink – white – and gold –
Neatly folded into Softness.
My empty desk and chair
Observe for hyper fun.

We pass by my only window –
Draped in sheer white curtains
Which hang over my barren
Wooden floor – our dance floor –
Of smooth gliding and swaying.

Freedom's moon lights our way –
Spreading her shimmering beams of smiles
All over us and Secrecy is our friend.
She smiles at us – and her eyes twinkle –
While she strokes her silky blonde hair – resembling mine.

We'll tell no one – no one at all –
Of our secret affair.
You run peachy fingers through your short
Seductive blonde hair.
You – Suicide himself – smile and spin once more.

'Commit me and live' – you breathe to me –
A soft warm blanket grows within your place inside
My funneled mind.


Comments about Dancing With Suicide by Amy Marie

  • (12/13/2015 8:26:00 AM)


    Romance with suicide....dangerously beautifully! (Report) Reply

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  • Kim Barney (12/4/2014 8:54:00 AM)


    Great title and great poem.
    Well written indeed.
    (Report) Reply

  • Stephen Magill (4/22/2010 2:30:00 PM)


    you touch too close but you do it so well. awesome write (Report) Reply

  • (2/20/2010 7:33:00 AM)


    Your words flowed and swayed like a dance, and it pulled me in as though I were the one wearing the nightgown of grape purple. Very good! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/11/2010 9:41:00 PM)


    Dangerous dance in reality but sliding across the poetic floor... (Report) Reply

  • (2/11/2010 7:00:00 PM)


    this blew my mind. your metaphors, word choice, everything the way you worded everything was nothing but amazing. im mad didnt think of it first. ;) i have no words to describe how much i love this poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 8, 2011


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