Dark Angel Poem by Ana Z. M.

Dark Angel

Rating: 3.4


First time I saw you,
your angelical face made me smile,
it kept all my attention,
it made me beleive I was in heaven.

I couldn't resist it's beauty,
I approached to admire more carefully,
the closer I was,
the more perfection it had.

My eyes didn't resist such a thing,
he became my very best friend,
he made me feel the real heaven,
he was my Angel.

But the more I knew him,
the more he turned into devil,
and his white perfect wings,
became a dark malicious shadow.

He betrayed me,
he hurt me,
he said he would heal my pain,
but all he did was make me gain.

Now all he's said is that I broke his heart,
but it was all hisfault,
he made me beleive things that were not true,
now that he's seen me crying,
he has felt my own pain.

So immature he was,
he couldn't handle the pain,
now he's creating more pain to me,
is a cycle that won't end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 22 September 2009

This is another sad piece, a wolf in a sheep clothing deceiving an innocent lamb. What a tragedy, Ana? Love this piece. Cheers...

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Darkness J 05 February 2009

Nice work Ana! Keep it.

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Bonnie Collins 02 February 2009

Very emotional write ana, absolutly beautifull...... Keep up the good work with your angel pen...... Bonnie

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Winnie Angel 28 January 2009

a passionate poem...have liked it..

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