Dark Couds Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Dark Couds

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Dark clouds appear
When you have fear
In mind and at heart
That can be bad start

Let us have one faith
Till the last breathe
As it provides
Means to survive

Why do we forget?
That life may face any fate
That shall be unpleasant too
Life is difficult to live through

If you are strong enough
To pass through rough
Weather and stand erect
That shall speak of your bold act

Not a religion alone
Not a prayer even if silently done
May help at any stage
It has something to reveal on page

The Best way is to offer
Sincerity along with prayer
And act in no defiance
But in acceptance

Wednesday, May 28, 2014
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Dark clouds appear When you have fear

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truely inspiring...! ! Trupti Parker2 hours ago *applauded* grt work...! !

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Good poem Keira Jones2 hours ago Good poem! Comment +1

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Thumbs Up Brandon Edwards2 hours ago I really liked this and the 3rd stanza spoke truth Comment +1

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Well expressed Subhashchandra Adhav2 hours ago It has something to reveal on page- - - - - Good line Good read

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Durga Patva true... 9 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Hasmukh Mehta welcome sheila anderson 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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I like it Gyasi Sirimou9 hours ago The last few words was it for me...

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I like it! Jamie Badley2 hours ago A really good poem! Good job my friend :) And act in no defiance But in acceptance Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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