Dark Matter Ignites Poem by Jen Van Houten

Dark Matter Ignites

Rating: 5.0


I lay in a pool of the universe. The cosmos dance around me in a stellar formation.

In what seems to be eternal darkness, complete silence, and total loneliness.
There are peeks of light, music in the nebulas, and moons to keep you company.

Galaxies welcome you a home. A place to stay on a planet orbiting in its center.
With a warm sun to keep a smile on your face, and constellations that tell you a story.

Shooting stars in an infinite flight, wanting to reach its destination without looking back.

Climbing the dust pillars to get a view of a black hole sucking in old life, to then see the rebirth of anew.

Gliding on the auroras leaving the darkness behind me.
Flying into a radiant supernova that is now me. A bright shining star for everyone to see.

Dark Matter Ignites
Sunday, March 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: metaphor,space,universe
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wanted to use the beauty of the universe as a metaphor to find the positives in a negative situation.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 March 2017

Strong metaphors in a poem written in heightened poetic diction. A well thought out piece. Thanks for sharing Jen and welcome to Poemhunter.

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Jen Van Houten 19 March 2017

Thank you so much, and thank you for the warm welcome

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Christopher Tye 19 March 2017

Truly impressive poem, so much style and imagery contained in your words.

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Jen Van Houten 19 March 2017

Thank you. I'm so glad that the purpose of the poem is radiating off to the readers.

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Tom Allport 19 March 2017

a matter of fact poem of all we can see? the darkness has now lifted and you can be what you want to be! well written.

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Jen Van Houten 19 March 2017

Thank you so much!

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