Kumarmani Mahakul

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Dark Matter Oh What Happens - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Still about your subatomic particles
No one can say exactly to us today,
Oh dear non-baryonic in nature, Dark Matter,
Still you fill up eighty five percent
Matter of the universe as known,
Your energy density dances in darkness,
You are mysteriously present in
Our astrophysical observations
And in gravitational effects,
All know you exist, all know the dark,
Entire universe and beyond that,
You are everywhere in trillions of galaxies,
In trillions of multiverses and great universes,
Scientists observe twinkling stars
Inside the deep darkness of vast space,
Although they go to planets or stars
Or they send vehicles or rockets,
Still they do not know what happens in darkness!

Ordinary matter is distinct from mind and spirit,
It occupies space and possesses mass,
Matter contains three types of atoms,
Positively charged particles are proton,
Particles which have no charge are neutrons,
Particles which are negatively charged are electrons,
Due to heavy nature protons and neutrons
They stay in the middle of the atoms,
And they are together called nucleus,
Dear Dark Matter, you rule over ordinary matter,
All natural laws secretly work truly within you,
Light is a small thing as compared to darkness,
Entire space is full of darkness due to you,
Stars like sun we see when we get reflection
Either from planets or from other stars,
No one says you are superstition,
You are the super dark belief,
You are the super dark truth!
Oh dear dark matter, what happens actually?
What happens in this vast dark space?
Where stars smile and twinkle
And planets are hung and ruled by force of gravitation,
You engulf the light and do miracle,
You record every action done in universe
You too behold the law of cause and effect
And you too handle law of action and reaction,
What happens inside the vast dark space?
Oh dear Dark Matter, please you whisper!

God has created you full of illusion,
Who can surpass and enter within you to know?
We are in search of eternal might of light,
Hearing his name of course you leave the way,
In deep silence in meditation we can feel,
You perfectly obey creator's rule,
Light twinkles within your lap expelling you
But still you spread your wings in infinite space,
You do the super black magic oh dear dark matter,
At deep night we see up above the sky,
We endlessly imagine but we cannot measure,
Dark Matter Oh Dark matter, what happens?
You are not the superstition!
You are the super dark belief, the super truth!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,30 September 2019. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: darkness, galaxy, night, philosophical , stars

Form: Free Verse


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Cover Photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,05 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Comments about Dark Matter Oh What Happens by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (11/4/2019 9:55:00 AM)

    You are the super dark belief,
    You are the super dark truth!

    Dark is always difficult to fathom and not easily comprehended. Yet, Kumarmani ji, you have analysed this phenomenon of darkness with such depth and given it light and illumination through your brilliant poem.
    I wonder, how i missed this poem. Glad i found it.......10
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  • Indira Renganathan (10/22/2019 9:12:00 AM)

    Fantastic and indeed a masterpiece....your dedication to this subject and the careful presentation is very much apparent in this poem... highly pleasing and informative
    'What happens inside the vast dark space?
    Oh dear Dark Matter, please you whisper! '...i too join you asking the Dark Matter the same...thanks and God bless you Kumarmani
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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (10/16/2019 8:51:00 AM)

    ADDITION: So sorry, there was NO VOTING Option on this page.. I just noticed. (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (10/16/2019 8:47:00 AM)

    (4) A 10 Full Score and myriad of 10´s more for this magnificent and very impressing poem. Up ToMyPoemsList.
    A smallest error below, the word must be written as " Sovereignty" . Thank you for your attention. God´s Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved épousse. Amen.
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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (10/16/2019 8:36:00 AM)

    (3) Too many galaxies. We live in this galaxy. And in each galaxy there are constantly that Dark Matter.God rules above all dark matters in all galaxies, I reckon. Under His Sovereignity all Dark Matters are adapting in each Galaxy. Hearing his name of course you leave the way, In deep silence in meditation we can feel, You perfectly obey creator's rule, We all obey Creator´s rules. I have enjoyed marvelously this brilliant poem about Dark Matter (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (10/16/2019 8:08:00 AM)

    (2) Then a few more lines toward the end of the same stanza: the last 5 lines:
    At deep night we see up above the sky,
    We endlessly imagine but we cannot measure,
    Dark Matter Oh Dark matter, what happens?
    You are not the superstition!
    You are the super dark belief, the super truth! ....................Excellent poem, created with the magical mind of our dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. WOW! What an uplifting read about the galaxie. Please read (3)
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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (10/16/2019 7:56:00 AM)

    Before I go responding this incredible poem, I will cite here 6 first lines from the final stanza from above:
    God has created you full of illusion,
    Who can surpass and enter within you to know?
    We are in search of eternal might of light,
    Hearing his name of course you leave the way,
    In deep silence in meditation we can feel,
    You perfectly obey creator's rule,

    Indeed The Creator is The Almighty and the Highest above all in the Universe. (Please read 2)
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  • Susan Williams (10/12/2019 5:42:00 PM)

    WoW! ! ! What a great endeavor and a stylish handling! ! ! You have declared with this poem that any topic can be handled by a poet! ! ! Terrific job! (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/6/2019 1:40:00 AM)

    Night! !
    Lights,
    Muse of the sky.


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Nosheen Irfan (10/6/2019 12:42:00 AM)

    A great philosophical poem that endeavors to answer questions we all have in our minds. The universe with its mysteries has always enthralled and baffled man. It is for man to find the light of truth in the dark matter. Well penned. (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/5/2019 10:47:00 AM)

    You have observed the scientific dimension of dark matter very minutely. Scientists have found this dark matter which is the basic for formation of this universe. That keeps the galaxies together. A lot of research is going on in this subject. A very beautiful poem on this subject. Words have been woven very cleverly to make it interesting. Suitable choice to be poem of the day. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (10/3/2019 11:42:00 PM)

    (Part-3) I like what you say in this stanza- -
    You are the super dark belief,
    You are the super dark truth!
    Oh dear dark matter, what happens actually?
    What happens in this vast dark space?
    Where stars smile and twinkle
    And planets are hung and ruled by force of gravitation,
    You engulf the light and do miracle,
    You record every action done in universe
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  • Bharati Nayak (10/3/2019 11:39:00 PM)

    (Part-2) It is amazing indeed how you have woven scientific facts and hypotheses into beautiful poetry.
    Our knowledge is too small to fathom the mysteries of dark matter..All living beings go through phases of light and darkness, of life and death.Light dazzles because of darkness.
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  • Bharati Nayak (10/3/2019 11:33:00 PM)

    Dear Dark Matter, you rule over ordinary matter,
    All natural laws secretly work truly within you,
    Light is a small thing as compared to darkness,
    Entire space is full of darkness due to you,
    Stars like sun we see when we get reflection
    Either from planets or from other stars,
    - - - - - - - -An amazing poem! (Part-1)
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  • Savita Tyagi (10/3/2019 5:33:00 PM)

    No one knows what happens in deep dark space......so wonderful to read this informative poem. When it comes to mystries of Universe we are still in dark. Its process and its workings work so silently. in silence of heart it influences us so mysteriously to create awe and wonder in our hearts and minds. Thank you for sharing with us this lovely poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/3/2019 4:23:00 PM)

    You have truly said that no one has yet known about the subatomic particles of dark matter. This poem carries much information and this is in right track. We should trust God and his creation. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/3/2019 4:20:00 PM)

    I wonder reading this scientific poem. You have informatively narrated your thought about the mysterious dark matter. Only God knows about his creation. This is difficult for scientists to know about darkness of space. (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (10/3/2019 12:18:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful piece of writing full of scientific information. We know what is there behind the dark matter! Much is hidden from our view and our power of understanding! Only God can unravel the mysteries! Thank you for sharing this informative piece! Top marks! (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (10/1/2019 1:31:00 AM)

    A lovely piece on Dark Matter superbly compiled, and very informative as well.
    Thanks for sharing.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 30, 2019

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 3, 2019


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