Dark Tears Poem by Hadil Diaf

Dark Tears



It's hard to cry the night
When no one knows about
Just you and your heart
Crying over your past
Seeing your wrodl fall apart
Not knowing where to go
Whom to ask and what to do
It's really so scary
When you feel kept
Prisoner of doubt
Fear, and so much regret
About every event of the past
It's just hard to be at night
Alone, full of guilt
And then, with all that
You start to forget
Whom you are and what
You have done and got
Thus, you die slowly
And become a shadow
Of the whispering night

Tuesday, July 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Watcher 25 July 2015

Nice words, and sad poem: -) As soon as we feel that we are doing something wrong, that means that we are working to inform ourselves. As we know, the first step to fix, is to know the mistake. Good poem, I just wished to see some positive conceptions in it. There's also a typo in the fifth line for the word World Thank you for your poems.

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Hadil Diaf

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Tizi Ouzou, Algeria
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