Shadow Poem by Hadil Diaf

Shadow

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As a dark shadow
i walk along the road
the light i follow
searching for the gold
that shining arrow
to get rid of my so old
and devastating sorrow

Shadow
Tuesday, May 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: shadow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 30 May 2016

wonderful expression, nice thoughts, thanks for sharing

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Michael Walkerjohn 17 May 2016

Aloha Hadil... This is such the pleasant relief... from dealing with an unimportant imp eariler in my session... I spend very little time here at the ph.c perhaps I sould spend more... perhaps not... You should never give up this search... for this arrow seeks the heart of those that think of it in this way... If I may, make you a fav... please tell me... I do so appreciate intelligence and wisdom coming from such a youthful perspective... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Hadil Diaf 17 May 2016

These are the nicest words i've ever read! Thank you so much Micheal, i'll sure follow your advice, and never stop looking for pleasure in everything and beauty in tiny things, ,

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Hadil Diaf

Tizi Ouzou, Algeria
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