Darkness Poem by JennyLynn Lavoie

Darkness

Rating: 5.0


be a light in the darkness let the shadows fade away

listen to the silence for what it has to say

fear not of what may happen, or what is yet to come

let it all unravel the way it need be done

let the angels rise above you and pick you off the ground

when god has shad his light on you is when you know your found.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 17 September 2011

I LIKE THE WAY YOU DEVELOPED YOUR THEME I SMILE AT LINES WHICH ARE POSITIVE AND ENCOURAGING YOU ARE GOOD WITH YOUR WORDS NICE. I ALSO HAVE A POEM OF THE SAME TITLE YOU MIGHT WANT TO VISIT IT NEXT TIME

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Cash Sixx 11 May 2011

I like how you put so much meaning into only 6 lines. Great job!

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