Dawn Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Silence of last night
Laying on the pillow
Waiting to be touched
By the liquid sun.

Sleep draped eyes
Opening adorably
To steal a morning kiss
From the loved one.

Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,lovers,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 30 October 2015

liquid sun metaphor at its best form

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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2015

Amazing poem.......What a way to start a fresh day, a kiss by loved ones.............No venture will fail till the dusk with the prefect dose of morning kiss 10+++.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2015

Wonderful silence lies on pillow of night is humorous amazingly. Very deep imagery is drawn here with images of sun and morning and hope, . Nice sharing...10

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Valsa George 02 September 2015

Lovely write! Silence of the night laying on the pillow and waking up to greet the dawn! Very imaginative! Enjoyed the poem Sanjukta!

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