Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Haiku - Raining In And Out - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

My desolate soul
By the edge of the window
Keep thinking of you.

With the sound of rain
Going down memory lane
Again and again.

It feels wet inside
Inner clouds showering gloom
As your love didn’t bloom.

Hopes are shivering
Heart is too fragile to mend
Still love never ends.

Topic(s) of this poem: heartache

Form: Haiku


Comments about Haiku - Raining In And Out by Sanjukta Nag

  • B.m. Biswas (11/24/2015 12:12:00 PM)


    a poet of feelings....a fine metaphor.....good. (Report) Reply

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  • Vishal Sharma (10/30/2015 3:28:00 PM)


    love at its best form (Report) Reply

  • Amitabho Sengupta (10/22/2015 2:06:00 AM)


    In the four stanzas of the above Haiku, a traditional form of Japanese poetry, with the 1st.,2nd. and 4th.lines of each stanza, hardly having any rhyme scheme and comprising 5,7and 5 syllables respectively, poetess, Sanjukta Nag, has been able to make love reign anyway in any mood of either melancholia or mirthfulness in us. The concise creation is aesthetically a potential rendition, indeed, (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (10/16/2015 4:25:00 PM)


    Love reigns in these beautiful Haiku..... (Report) Reply

  • (10/15/2015 4:48:00 AM)


    lovely haiku written with love.
    thanks-10
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  • Valsa George (9/22/2015 11:44:00 PM)


    The rain has intensified the longing for a loved one! Though there is gloom gathering in the heart about the love that couldn't blossom, love continues to burn inside, making life hopeful! Beautiful string of Senryu! You have such discipline over your words! (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (9/22/2015 10:55:00 AM)


    Beautiful love to read again and again (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2015 12:31:00 PM)


    This is a wonderful poem....Hope and love....they remain eternal. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (9/15/2015 11:23:00 PM)


    Lovely poem. Simple and beautiful. Keep it up, dear poet. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (9/14/2015 7:50:00 PM)


    It feels wet inside
    Inner clouds showering gloom
    As your love did not bloom- - - -Beautiful rendition.
    (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/13/2015 11:26:00 AM)


    Hopes are shivering
    Heart is too fragile to mend
    Still love never ends. it is the insatiable desire to love and to be loved which keeps us going on in life and through life. no one can live without love. thank you for your poetic expressions.
    (Report) Reply

  • Della Perry (9/13/2015 11:07:00 AM)


    Lovely poem, I could imagine the person standing by the window. I also loved your haikus. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (9/10/2015 12:32:00 PM)


    There is still a hope that someday you will get the love. Full of hope the poem flows with a nice style. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (9/10/2015 5:30:00 AM)


    I can see a lover sitting by a window deep in though about their past lover. Good poem (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/10/2015 3:11:00 AM)


    Still thinking of you; with the muse of love and life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/9/2015 1:28:00 PM)


    Never ending story of love..............threaded with silken words...........Loved it....10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/9/2015 12:57:00 PM)


    It feels wet inside
    Inner clouds showering gloom
    As your love didn’t bloom......deep speculation, deep love. Marvellous depiction with diction. Thank to you dear Sanjukta I like your poem posting. .....10
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 10, 2015


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