Ripper Jones

Veteran Poet - 1,247 Points (Swansea)

Dawn. - Poem by Ripper Jones

I saw infinity the other day.
I stepped outside this aimless place
of unfulfilled desires.
I was apart from time.
I saw the gods, whose reality
was radiating from the nothing
in itself. Spectral beings with
no form or matter,
but pure thought, defying
arcane logic and existential angst.
It was the time of day when Aurora,
in this tiny piece of the universe,
was active. Like an angel
she mesmerised sleepy Helios
as he arose from his infernal bed.
A million fires energised
his chariot on its
diurnal passage refreshing
Earth’s soul. As the sun
gently adorned
the earth in yellow golden
hues with fields, trees,
and buildings providing the
decorations, wind machines
and pythons draped like fairy lights
on Christmas trees as they reflected
the glare creating the moment
of a marvellously surreal scene.

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about Dawn. by Ripper Jones

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/15/2016 1:27:00 PM)


    i saw infinity the other day. the verses you begin with is already marvelous. like the poem very much. it is a very good meditation. thank you. tony (Report) Reply

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  • (12/11/2015 11:55:00 PM)


    Excellent flight of imagery displayed in this beautiful poem with a spiritual base. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Emily Krauss (12/11/2015 10:43:00 PM)


    I really enjoyed reading this poem (Report) Reply

  • Emily Krauss (12/11/2015 10:42:00 PM)


    I really enjoyed reading your poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2015



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