Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 416,136 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Dawn Has Just Arrived - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

With freshness of time and hope
Dawn has arrived we see eagerly
Giving birth to child sun
Now dawn smiles with blessings.

Awakening has happened of mind
Trees have started breathing
Fresh air and fresh mind talk
New flowers smile in branches.

Welcoming this child sun they say
Calm sun is going to glow soon
Boon is gifted by God for duty
New chapter is going to start.

Sun is colouring the entire sky
Our hopes are pink now to shine
Sun is in meditation and we are
We thank God for gifting dawn.

Rising in to hope every tree
Now tree sees birth of new sun
Weather has given company to sky
Colour of devotion is painted.

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual, beauty, dawn , love and art, morning, nature


Comments about Dawn Has Just Arrived by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Unnikrishnan E S (12/31/2019 6:25:00 PM)

    Dawn always come with hope. Very innovative approach to poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (11/25/2018 5:36:00 AM)

    Morning has a beauty of its own: it is joyful, hopeful; refreshes and renews everything: almost like a rebirth. Another wonderful morning poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Seamus O BrianSeamus O Brian (7/27/2017 10:50:00 PM)

    Very nicely penned contemplation of the morning. Indeed every day is truly a gift and ought to be experienced in that way. Thank you for this lovely reminder of that essential truth. (Report)Reply

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  • Seamus O BrianSeamus O Brian (7/27/2017 10:46:00 PM)

    Another delightful poem of the morning. I am glad we share this mutual appreciation of the early hours of the day. You give great honor to my favorite time of the day. Thank you! (Report)Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (10/17/2016 11:26:00 AM)

    Dawn has arrived
    Giving birth to infant Sun,
    Showering blessings
    And warm greetings.
    Thanks for sharing an inspirational nature poem.10 points.
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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (10/17/2016 10:37:00 AM)

    A poem with lots of hope and positive energy. Always take inspiration from what nature offers us. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed the rhythm. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (10/17/2016 10:04:00 AM)

    Beauty of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 17, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 18, 2016


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