Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 700,065 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Day Dream - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

The desire and goal
Certainly wants honest call
Hard work and determination
Strong resolve with indication

Nothing wring in having desire
On the contrary it is thing to admires
Person is nothing without future
He must work in direction and ensure

Day dream won’t work
That has to be matched with words
People may want action with result
Or get ready to face the insult

World wants swing
No scope for strangulation with ring
It wants quick result with orientation
Strong bid with result in rotation

Success may have different story
It is essential and necessary
You should smile with satisfaction
People may follow you without contradiction


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/15/2014 9:27:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/15/2014 9:27:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome JaiRam Tiwari and Maricela Ramírez like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/14/2014 8:08:00 PM)

    The desire and goal
    Certainly wants honest call
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/14/2014 8:07:00 PM)

    nice

    Bailey LaFleur7 minutes ago
    it's great!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/14/2014 8:07:00 PM)

    Idealistic


    Agnes Bain3 minutes ago
    The writer appears to tell the reader of the qualities and ideals he sees in life.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/14/2014 8:07:00 PM)

    Aggressive society

    Jeston Froehlich4 minutes ago
    Love the line hard work determination.. resolve w indication. Pretty much sums it up.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 14, 2014



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