Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Day Passes - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Day passes with struggle
I witness smile on faces of people
They are all enjoying journey
Blessed on all of us by an almighty

As soon as night approaches
It makes me to miss
When I see flowers on table
It makes me sad but forces to smile

I realize it lately
That something is moving rapidly
I shall tell her plainly
How I feel lonely?

You have red cheeks
And I always seek
An opportunity to speak
But you always sneak out

Should I take it final departure?
Are really serious and sure?
Am I that untrustworthy?
Why has the situation stormy?

I must remind her of promises
Made in person and missed
But I swear and stand by
I shall be with you always and prepared to fly

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Comments about Day Passes by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2015 10:46:00 AM)


    Realistic Poetry International Beautifully written, Hasmukh! Sweet and lovely. smile emoticon Like · Reply · 1
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2015 10:46:00 AM)


    welcome Delano Johnson Poet Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
    today
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2015 10:45:00 AM)


    welcome olaitan marym Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
    today
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2015 6:47:00 PM)


    Romeo Della Valle Thanks dear brother Hasmukh Mehta for your awesome comment! Blessings from New York
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2015 11:08:00 AM)


    I must remind her of promises
    Made in person and missed
    But I swear and stand by
    I shall be with you always and prepared to fly
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 3, 2015



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