Daybreak Poem by Indira Renganathan

Daybreak

Rating: 5.0


Housed street
Breaking the day through a window-rift
Garden aroma hushing in waking up the mind
Lazy-hazy mood deterged to rise from grey dip
Pinky blossoms streaking in breezy comfort
Fluttering crowing upping to starry scattering
Bidding bye, bye stars and electric fluorescence
Paper-man, milk-man on pell-mell cycling
Out comes my soul to the porch
Not to the farther sun orangy
But to the Sarakondrai(Cassia fistula)nigher
Her chromatic golden foliage blooming
My aesthete to her aesthete wishing
Good morning

Saturday, June 13, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 13 June 2009

Aromatic composition on daybreak. Love imageries are there.10+++

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excellent write...brought the day break to me with all its freshnes and beauty

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Priyanka Bhowmick 13 June 2009

a lovely scenario in the morning....small n sweet

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Indira Babbellapati 13 June 2009

thnq for reminding us of the sights and sounds we tend to take for granted...

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2009

truely well written...thought out and flowery poem love of nature.....galorte yes the casia cascades are in full bloom in the sultry days.....seemingly mocking the sun with its dying rays at dusk very nice poem cheers

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Rakesh Bedi 13 June 2009

Beautiful description of a morning; especially.... out comes my soul to the porche....

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