Sunshine Poems: 104 / 500

To Fall Is To Rise

Rating: 5.0

Life seems old
And falling

Which hand's there
To hold and rise

Waiting
Like the fallen
Leaves with the
withered look

To be swept up by
A monsoon blow
For a new season

So that
A nascent leaf
Fluttering
In gentle breeze
Flickering
In golden sunshine
In the lap of mother nature
Excites me

As I keep gazing
Kicking my tiny legs
In my mother's lap

Saturday, September 26, 2020
Sunshine Poems: 104 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 26 September 2020

What a fantastic description of a life sketch you have made through the nature, Amusing 10**** Indeed we all are tiny kids in front of mother nature.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2020

Yes madam, to fall means to rise. In old age people need to rise with the help of their grandsons or grand daughters. After final falling a person gets nascent body like a new leaf of a tree. A well imaginative poem with a philosophical base has been composed by you incisively. Full five stars.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 September 2020

Sort of a beautiful philosophical write about the life. Very beautifully crafted. 'To be swept up by A monsoon blow For a new season'.. is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2020

A motivational piece of work dear madam! Brilliantly composed..5 ??

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2020

A nascent leaf Fluttering In gentle breeze Flickering In golden sunshine In the lap of mother nature Excites me......captivating poetic expression! HNY 2021 to you and your beloved family dear madam. Stay always happy and blessed!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 July 2021

A motivational piece of work! Priceless words dear madam.

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Marvelous verses and images woven to paint how we go through life imbued with the beauty and wonders of Mother Nature. To my Poem List.

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A moving and beautiful portrayal on the stages of life. Wonderful

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Varsha M 07 February 2021

Revisiting ma'am. The understanding from an infant's perspective...as she/ he looks the natursl principle of regulations or continuity of life. Beautiful ma'am. Name is apt. Into my favourite. Verify inspirational.

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 February 2021

Cutest poem I have come across today at ph my compliments.

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