To Fall Is To Rise Poem by Indira Renganathan

To Fall Is To Rise

Rating: 5.0


Life seems old
And falling

Which hand's there
To hold and rise

Waiting
Like the fallen
Leaves with the
withered look

To be swept up by
A monsoon blow
For a new season

So that
A nascent leaf
Fluttering
In gentle breeze
Flickering
In golden sunshine
In the lap of mother nature
Excites me

As I keep gazing
Kicking my tiny legs
In my mother's lap

Saturday, September 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 26 September 2020

What a fantastic description of a life sketch you have made through the nature, Amusing 10**** Indeed we all are tiny kids in front of mother nature.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2020

Yes madam, to fall means to rise. In old age people need to rise with the help of their grandsons or grand daughters. After final falling a person gets nascent body like a new leaf of a tree. A well imaginative poem with a philosophical base has been composed by you incisively. Full five stars.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 September 2020

Sort of a beautiful philosophical write about the life. Very beautifully crafted. 'To be swept up by A monsoon blow For a new season'.. is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2020

A motivational piece of work dear madam! Brilliantly composed..5 🌟

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 February 2021

Cutest poem I have come across today at ph my compliments.

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Chinedu Dike 13 August 2022

Profound philosophical rendition very powerfully penned with lucidity of thought. A work of an intricate mind.... Thanks for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Stay blessed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 July 2021

A motivational piece of work! Priceless words dear madam.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2021

Marvelous verses and images woven to paint how we go through life imbued with the beauty and wonders of Mother Nature. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2021

A moving and beautiful portrayal on the stages of life. Wonderful

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Varsha M 07 February 2021

Revisiting ma'am. The understanding from an infant's perspective...as she/ he looks the natursl principle of regulations or continuity of life. Beautiful ma'am. Name is apt. Into my favourite. Verify inspirational.

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