Dazzling Children Poem by Daniel Brick

Dazzling Children

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Over the soft warm islands
of the South Pacific,
the sun traced its daily journey
until MAUI shook his fat finger
at the course of day
and stalled it so that
his mother had time to cook
his food properly and serve it.

Abraham mixed a child's
daydream with a thought too big
for a youngster's head and came up
with the notion of One God...
He was puzzled then
when he watched the half-brothers
give each other full body hugs and kisses.
Ishmael held Isaac's face between his hands,
saying, 'Dear brother, may your stars
multiply in the heavens a thousand fold.'
And Isaac bowed deeply to Ishmael.
Both were smiling into a gray twilight.

Then Jesus confounded
wise men in the Temple.
They looked around nervously
avoiding each other's eyes,
since they all felt stuck
in the subtle webs
of a child's brain
with a divine mind inside.

Heracles sat up right in his cart,
laughing and delighted that he could
squeeze the life out of Hera's snakes,
their insides bulging out of their mouths,
while Iphicles played the sobbing wreck.

Their second-born fixed the hammock's shadow
so it fell precisely on his face
as he lay in a repose so still
his parents could hardly believe,
'This too is our child.'

Sunday, June 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: children
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In teaching World Mythology for many years, I became aware of the fact that the exploits of the great hero's begin when they are very young, even babies. Often the grown-ups around miss these early displays because they are not paying attention. One lovely exception: St. Luke comments on the story of Jesus and the wise men by writing,
'His mother stored up all these things in her heart.' Rilke elaborates on this: 'Could she be otherwise than proud of him / who turned to beauty the simplest of her gestures.'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 14 March 2016

An interesting poem. Enjoyed reading it. I liked the lines ~ Abraham mixed a child's daydream with a thought too big for a youngster's head and came up with the notion of One God... Sometimes, daydream with a thought too big... A good write

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Daniel Brick 14 March 2016

GENESIS is the basis for three World Religions with a total of about 2 1/2 billion people but it is so brief and thin in detail. So I decided to add a few details. So many brothers in Genesis are hostile and violent, I decided to make two of them - Isaac and Ishmael - very good friends.

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Noreen Carden 09 June 2014

I agree with Marie you craft your poem and draw the reader in as you weave a magical journey as with this poem beginning in the South Pacific and on to Jerusalem. Really beautiful as always Daniel.

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