Deadly Desire Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Deadly Desire
I have gone crazy
As she showed her self very busy
I was expecting her to be easy
But she was all the more no lazy
She has shine in eyes
So all my efforts fail
She does not allow me to go near
I have developed now unknown fear
She may smile occasionally
I stand there to accept readily
I am unable to guess as what she will
Her seductive eyes try to kill
She whispers with snake’s charm
More for causing irreparable harm
I still prefer her compare to others
She is open and wonderfully offers
Long distance gesture helps me more
I have every reason to adore
She stands in complete harmony
As if made for me by almighty
Whatever people may tell about!
I shall be with her and out
She is mine and may stay so
I shall prefer all the times to go
I am playing with fire
But it is deadly desire
I can’t help in overcoming
As she stands at the door and welcoming
Rosina Higgins likes this. Rosina Higgins She whispers with snake’s charm! ! ! 35 minutes ago · Unlike · 1
Edited work needed Ken Jordan2 minutes ago The concept of poetry is there, however, some lines are not grammatically correct. Keep writing my friend. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago i shall be obliged if some lines are corrected and sent to me 0 Needs work
Jesse Radin15 minutes ago Maybe I am incorrect but I feel the grammar detracts from the poem overall Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago suggest what it could have been.. it is right fro mind chamber with word dictionery. i shall appreciate if u proof n send me back
I have gone crazy As she showed her self very busy
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