The pain that people feel,
is the rough past coming out.
You just have to embrace and deal,
so in peace may lay your doubts.
past problems try to criple us,
make you forget about all the good.
Ganging up to make us crush,
and not love each other like we should.
We got too much ignorance,
to be falling for the old.
The ones we love make the difference,
on which ones we keep and fold.
Injuries old and new,
memories of good and bad.
it's something life has set and drew,
so you will appreciate on what you had.
On life and it's confusing system,
our common sense comes to us.
speaking words of wisom,
keeping lives balanced and just.
You write from the heart and with purity... That is required for a good poet the rest comes with experience... Keep writing... Sincerely, Kamran
Sometimes our past's bad experiences mess up our present times. We really should know how to deal with our pain. I like its lesson. Keep on writing more and more. I can see you have the potential to become a great poet.
quite amazing write that bristles the wisdom, yet with imasgery, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing
A well-worked out analysis of the pain in life and life's confusion. A youthful wisdom that is evident in these lines.
Paining experiences are part of the life game...'just embrace and deal' them as you said very well, Kathryn...and 'the ones we love make the difference' and look forward to them when you are in pain...motivating and educative...written beautiful...10
This is a great poem very descriptive on the emtions one feels when dealing with pain, keep writing 10 +. My regards Joey
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice poem............ i like it............... Athena *** words will change the world ***