Dear God, Poem by Jamal Brown

Dear God,

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As I close my eyes and bow my head,
forgive me for all of the terrible things that
I've said.
Forgive me for all of the people that I have hurt today
and the people I have hurt in days past away.
I apoligize for not living by your life every waking
moment of mine.
I am a fallen saint,
and to get back-up it's
taking a little time.
I just want to say, thank you
for this day,
so that I may praise your name
with style and grace like a gentle
fallen rain.
I want you to know that even though alot of things
don't go as I planned,
I thank you for being on my side
when I get I trouble.
I thank you for taking a stand.
I pray that you
know you are everything in my life
from the begining to the end.
I would give you everything I have,
but I have nothing. I can
only give my heart to
live in.
Dear GOD, I'm so sorry for losing faith
when things go wrong. I
know I'm young and not out on my own yet,
but still somethings make it hard for me to stay strong.
So thanks to you I still love everyone
and I still have a heart that cares.
Dear GOD, I love you,
for this is my goodnight prayer.

Saturday, November 14, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: goodnight,waking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

apologizing for the wrong done, being grateful for whatever we have, thanking for the day.this poem has an essence I love.we sometimes lose faith, but there are ways out of our problems, there is light somewhere.

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I'm me 17 January 2010

very similar prayer to what I pray sometimes :) never lose hope and keep seeking God when you fall He's always there to pick you up, just go to Him. shalom! -Cheng Zheng

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