Friday, January 30, 2015

Dear Lonely Animal, Comments

Rating: 3.5

I'm writing to you from the loneliest, most
secluded island in the world. I mean,
the farthest away place from anything else.
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Stephen Katona 20 August 2016

Your love of animals and despair at a world that quels their voices comes across in this moving, powerful poem.

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Bri Edwards 11 August 2016

i might as well read the third poem. do i hear a piano in the background? favorite lines........so far: high fancy vaults where bits of colored glass are pieced together into stories....................................yes, stories. animal rights activist, or just a concerned-for-animals'-welfare person? let's call the lab animals altruistic, give them a national day on the calendar, and count our blessings when drugs they make possible save someone we know, or even love. not to mention surgical procedures sometime tried on animals first i bet! bri ;) you are a fine story teller, ...........like i am! ok, time to practice more piano! i can play one piece on the piano, and not so well: Happy Birthday. but i'm proud of my accomplishment! ! ! to MyPoemList

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Suburban Lovechild 04 February 2015

Nice journey, fun read

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Darren Hobson 30 January 2015

loved the way this poem flows!

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